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Rain the one by =Isaiah441570:iconIsaiah441570:

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People who pay attention should know who rain is and know why im drawing her, if you dont, well....you are just gonna have to wait..LOL!

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~PerseBalthasaar Jun 26, 2009, 3:38:56 AM
A nice work featuring a cute pin-up lady, just like most of your artwork ^^

The color applied to the lady is nice, a smooth shade is seen, along with nice shine. The problem, however, seems to be the light source. For me, it's quite unclear if the light is coming from top right, top, or top-left. From the shading of her clothes, it appears to be at top-right.

Another problem seems to be the unclear theme. The lady appears to have contemporary clothing style without any hint of fantasy theme, yet the background features rune circles, which best used as a fantasy-themed works.

Putting the theme flaw aside, this work is good.
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:iconalascarmesis:
*alascarmesis Jun 24, 2009, 6:35:55 PM
looks great

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The only truth on this live is the luck...... the ones who live enjoyin his luck by his own will are the ones who live accord they own way and can keep going foward .... ZVH

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~AzUrEkYtE Jun 24, 2009, 6:37:15 PM
AWESOME!!!!

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AWW the teddy bear missed *playing guilty gear as bridget*
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=Isaiah441570 Jun 24, 2009, 6:39:36 PM
thank you

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=Isaiah441570 Jun 24, 2009, 6:39:42 PM
yep

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check my lil old gallery out : [link]

Jet Flight comic Held here updated every 1 to 2 weeks
[link]

Like hip hop? Also check my music out @ [link]
:iconalascarmesis:
*alascarmesis Jun 24, 2009, 6:41:13 PM
welcome

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The only truth on this live is the luck...... the ones who live enjoyin his luck by his own will are the ones who live accord they own way and can keep going foward .... ZVH

"IF YOU DONT LIKE MY WORK DONT SEE IT, OR DONT TALK BAD OF IT EITHER PLEASE"
:iconazurekyte:
~AzUrEkYtE Jun 24, 2009, 6:43:55 PM
X3

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AWW the teddy bear missed *playing guilty gear as bridget*
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~OathKeeper5 Jun 24, 2009, 7:01:19 PM
Cool! :D How did you do the designs in the background? It's amazing!
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*Jordan-Knaggs Jun 24, 2009, 7:06:13 PM
nice character and awesome background
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=Isaiah441570 Jun 24, 2009, 7:09:14 PM
thank you

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check my lil old gallery out : [link]

Jet Flight comic Held here updated every 1 to 2 weeks
[link]

Like hip hop? Also check my music out @ [link]
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=Isaiah441570 Jun 24, 2009, 7:12:20 PM
they are special brushes on Photoshop that I use

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check my lil old gallery out : [link]

Jet Flight comic Held here updated every 1 to 2 weeks
[link]

Like hip hop? Also check my music out @ [link]
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